Feedback


Blind men and elephant

feedback 1

Home page is long, maybe could be simplified so the aim of the project is more clear. The wildlife images are beautiful, and need some explanation and linking back to the main point/page The dog sequence is interesting and links directly into the project aim, that is my favourite page.

feedback 2

The home page doesn't include the actual story of the three blind men and the elephant. The home page goes into advanced detail about philosophy, it might be hard to include all of that in a small photography project. It is hard to see how photographs can illustrate a lot of this. I like the dog page and the van gogh research page because I can really see how this fits into the project. I also really like the horse eye page it is very interesting to see a sketch from the horses perspective. I would like to see the original horse eye image before it was photoshopped.

Response to feedback

I can understand how the original exploanation on the home page migt be a bit too wide ranging for the scope of this project. I am very interested in philosophy, but this is a photography project. So in response to the feedback I simplified the explanation and scope of the project. (You can see the original home page here